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"When engine breaks--

PRAY."

--Pilot Manual
:iconbraverose:
For #SixWordStories' Around The World in 80 Days Contest [link]

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[02.29.12] Update.... :phae:

I don't know where to start :D

Um... I would like to thank everyone from #SixWordStories for hosting this contest, for accepting my submission, and for believing my entry is worthy to be read :wow:

Thank you, judges and admins of #SixWordStories, also to everyone who's reading this, faving and adding to collection, and even featured this on their journals :wow: and also to everyone who's giving advices and constructive criticism :heart:
I really appreciate it! Thank you so much :iconiloveyouplz:

I want to go over everyone's pages to thank them individually--It's really unfortunate that I'm so busy with my tasks right now! :iconcutecryplz:

But of course I will very soon :3
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*Jacob-C-Wolf Jul 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very good six worded story. I love the humor. What makes a good six word story to you?
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:iconinnocencedied2nite:
:giggle: Congrats on your win! So.. funny...
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~PastelPaintPrincess Apr 3, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is brilliant!
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~icytemporalist Mar 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Short, sharp, to the point, and utterly ingenious. That is what I love about these. :D
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^3wyl Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is pretty awesome! :la:

I really like the concept and the direction that you've taken to approach the concept and contest here. The structure is great and the way you have laid it out is something akin to what we'd expect of a manual, I guess you could say.

Either way, it's pretty original and I like how even the pilot doesn't know there... sort of ironic, in a way.

This piece says a lot, I think. :D
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^3wyl Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the use of ellipses and how that expresses the time that has passed. The question and exclamation marks convey the mood and atmosphere well... and I like how you've put the ellipses at the beginning of the last line there so that these things are connected?

It feels as if you are trying to show to us the thought processes going on, which is pretty cool.

It's well portrayed in six word story form. :nod:

Perhaps you could use italics or something. o.O
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~ShuyinTheEnigmatic Mar 3, 2012  Student Writer
Pretty nice work!
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:iconhoshisamavalmor:
this is great ;) Congrats in winning, six word stories sound quite challenging and yours is just awesome
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*Artemis-Day Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Now there's some useful advice. :D
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*SCFrankles Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Many congratulations! A worthy winner ^_^
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